Mudcat Café message #674283 The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #45506   Message #674283
Posted By: McGrath of Harlow
22-Mar-02 - 04:53 PM
Thread Name: Politically incorrect national anthems
Subject: RE: Politically incorrect national anthems
That's a neat bit of rewriting Amos, and very singable too. But I think if I'd sooner keep the lines there of the original and imagine I was off on a camping adventure. Especially if I was a child.

I think I'd feel it was a bit too cosy with the nice warm fire on the hearth and the roof over me instead of the blazing campfire and the starry heavens.