Mudcat Café message #3556944 The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #152141   Message #3556944
Posted By: GUEST,Tunesmith
07-Sep-13 - 04:50 PM
Thread Name: Improving Lyrics?
Subject: RE: Improving Lyrics?
Disagree!
The opening of the box was the life-changing moment!
Between, getting up - on the day they found the box - and going to bed, on that same day, they, their father/husband, became a different person!
Yes, up until they found the box, they thought they knew the man.
That is the drama! That is the suddenness. That is the shock of the new!