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Posted By: Nigel Parsons
07-Sep-13 - 03:51 PM
Thread Name: Improving Lyrics?
Subject: RE: Improving Lyrics?
So, "up until they found the box", they had a particular view, but after they found it, and studied the contents, their view was changed forever.
Exactly, it's not 'finding the box' that brings about the change, which is why I suggested a further revision.

Cheers