Mudcat Café message #3556901 The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #152141   Message #3556901
Posted By: GUEST,Tunesmith
07-Sep-13 - 02:20 PM
Thread Name: Improving Lyrics?
Subject: RE: Improving Lyrics?
mg, don't get distracted!
THINK! Which line is clearer, and makes more sense! And, for that matter, is more dramatic!