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Thread #152141   Message #3556888
Posted By: GUEST,Tunesmith
07-Sep-13 - 01:56 PM
Thread Name: Improving Lyrics?
Subject: Improving Lyrics?
I'm a big fan of country singer Randy Travis and I have a soft spot for his country, story song "The Box".
However, I think some of the lyrics could be improved.
Now, you'll have to listen to the song (see link) to put all this into context, but I'd change the line:
         
          "But that was long before we found the box"

to   " But that was up until we found the box"

What do we think?


The Box video link