Mudcat Café message #1878816 The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #82010   Message #1878816
Posted By: Genie
08-Nov-06 - 02:37 AM
Thread Name: worst rhyme ever
Subject: RE: worst rhyme ever
Ok, Snuffy, maybe I should have acknowledged "gone" and "one" as a half-rhyme, but it's part of the repeated REFRAIN.   (I still don't think it rhymes, but that's just me.)

The point was that once the repetitive refrain is established, the rest of the lines don't even try to rhyme, yet the song still has very regular patterns.