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Thread #82010   Message #1838855
Posted By: Genie
20-Sep-06 - 02:38 AM
Thread Name: worst rhyme ever
Subject: RE: worst rhyme ever
I pretty much agree, Robbie.

I'm sick of certain overused, unimaginative, "easy" rhymes, such as
"I'll keep waiting,
Anticipating ... "

and bad grammar done just to force the rhyme, e.g.

"Tell me lies, tell me sweet little lies.
O no, no, no you can't disguise ... "

or "Hungry Eyes,
One look at you and I can't disguise ..."

(Disguise WHAT!!??)

or "Hungry Eyes,
I feel the magic between you and I ... "