Mudcat Café message #1779979 The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #92871   Message #1779979
Posted By: GUEST,mg
09-Jul-06 - 11:26 PM
Thread Name: What's wrong with this song?
Subject: RE: What's wrong with this song?
Well...I like the chorus...the rest of it doesn't really scan too well which is the biggest problem I think songs have. And it is offensive talking about people wearing towels and it is uncertain to me they had greed rather than sincere religious fanaticism...
and heads and towelettes don't rhyme....so I would say just sing songs that are popular where you play and some of your own but I would let this one go. mg