Mudcat Café message #1504309 The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #82010   Message #1504309
Posted By: GUEST,Uncle DaveO
19-Jun-05 - 11:24 AM
Thread Name: worst rhyme ever
Subject: RE: worst rhyme ever
Number 6 said:

I cringe at the line ...

"Down the lane I walk with my sweet Mary, hair of gold and lips like cherry."


What's wrong with that rhyme?

Now you might not like the line as a matter writing style, but it sounds like a perfect rhyme to me.

Dave Oesterreich