Mudcat Café message #1179996 The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #69530   Message #1179996
Posted By: Amos
07-May-04 - 12:03 AM
Thread Name: Let's update 'Sensitive New Age Guys'
Subject: RE: Let's update 'Sensitive New Age Guys'
I dunno who New Age guys dress like in your neck o' the woods -- around here, though, they dress like a cross between Harrison Ford and Robert Redford. But what would I know about "modernity"??

There's a delicate balance to be struck in extending these lyrics, between refreshing frankness and compassionate discretion. I have the refreshing frankness part down pretty good, but the compassionate discretion part makes my fingers bleed. I dunno what I am doing wrong!